Some advice for if you want to edit your blog is you should use a bit more detail when describing the jobs. Other than that, it sounded good.
I agree with cassidyd1 and I think you should use your voice in your blog a bit more!
like KatelynO1 said I think your words shouldnt sound like yuu copied strainght from the text bit like put some enthusiam in it. Great job though !
Some advice for if you want to edit your blog is you should use a bit more detail when describing the jobs. Other than that, it sounded good.
ReplyDeleteI agree with cassidyd1 and I think you should use your voice in your blog a bit more!
ReplyDeletelike KatelynO1 said I think your words shouldnt sound like yuu copied strainght from the text bit like put some enthusiam in it. Great job though !
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